State Assessment writing in 5th grade = :(
Testing kids on one paper that was probably timed to be written in 30 minutes or less is absolutely not a good way to evaluate anyone's writing. I give the KELPA to all English as a Second Language students and there is a writing part. The students are only given 20 minutes to write either about a picture or a prompt. I couldn't imagine being those kids having to come up with an idea and then actually try to write something that makes sense and is considered adequate. Together all ELA teachers meet on one given day after the window for the test has ended and we score the tests on vocabulary, sentence fluency, grammar, mechanics, organization and development. Some of the stories are actually surprising and very good and then more often than not there are the ones that are absolutely terrible! What can we expect when we only give the kids that much time and we are only looking at one sample from them? I like the idea of using rubrics when the kids are writing something required but don't want to overuse the rubrics and give the students more choice but also have a guiding criteria.
I thought that it was important to remember this and so I typed it into my notes:
1. Schedule writing every day. Try for 20-30 minutes of silent sustained writing.
2. Time your minilessons. Limit yourself to between 5-15 minutes and teaching that take place improve the quality of students' writing.
3. Don't shortchange the time for whole-class share. The celebration and teaching that take place improve the quality of students' writing.
4. Announce the time frame at the start. You will have twenty minutes to complete this piece.
5. Announce when students only have a few minutes left to write. You have five more minutes. Finish up where you are and reread.
6. Make sure the topics students are writing about are relevant to their lives and interests.
7. Do a great job of demonstrating and frontloading. The more prepared students are to write, the more easily they write.
8. Use quickwrites (pg. 179), also called freewrites, regularly.
Schedule writing every day or at least on consecutive days
2. Limit the use of prompts that have no real audience (such as, "Write a letter to the author telling him one thing you would change about the story").
3. Provide more choice of writing topics. Students write more easily about something they are interested in.
4. Integrate test preparation.
5. Teach basic skills in context.
6. Teach students to revise and edit as they go; this saves time later on.
7. Expect high-frequency words to be correctly spelled. This saves correction time and aids speeding of writing.
8. Expect legible handwriting. This saves time for your students and for you.
9. Encourage invented spellings within reasonable, agreed-on-guidelines. This speeds up writing and encourages broader use of words.
10. Use parents as final editors in the classroom.
11. Tell students why - make writing purpose understood. Students will invest more in their writing.